Her voice during the bridge and the final adlibs is great.
But the chorus is just too layered. She just needs to sing out clearly and in a straightforward way for her single releases especially.
The songs melody is amazing. The lyrics are good. So there is enough in the song to prove she is inspired and I think the album will have some great tracks.
I would just like the production of her vocals to improve because I think that is the main problem on the song. She just sounds too far away.